(SERIOUSLY?! )
"Okay. Hope I won't scare you much." He lightly bit the rabbit and dragged it closer to himself. He smelled the blood from the rodent and instincts acted instantly. His canines grew longer and sharper, his eyes turned deep red. He snapped at the dead rabbit and held it between his teeth. (I'll try not to make it too graphic.) He then carried out the simple procedure of draining his prey. With his fangs, he made a hole a little wide and a little deep. Then the red liquid leaked into his mouth and down his throat. A few minutes passed. "I'm finished." he said and nudged the rabbit toward Malakai. He felt more awake now that he had something to eat. He licked his lips and the fangs disappeared. His eyes turned back to the eerie yellow and he had a smile on his face. He felt content. He then waited for Malakai to respond.
"Okay. Hope I won't scare you much." He lightly bit the rabbit and dragged it closer to himself. He smelled the blood from the rodent and instincts acted instantly. His canines grew longer and sharper, his eyes turned deep red. He snapped at the dead rabbit and held it between his teeth. (I'll try not to make it too graphic.) He then carried out the simple procedure of draining his prey. With his fangs, he made a hole a little wide and a little deep. Then the red liquid leaked into his mouth and down his throat. A few minutes passed. "I'm finished." he said and nudged the rabbit toward Malakai. He felt more awake now that he had something to eat. He licked his lips and the fangs disappeared. His eyes turned back to the eerie yellow and he had a smile on his face. He felt content. He then waited for Malakai to respond.